Wednesday, October 24, 2018

The underwater cave


BY DARCY ATKINSON


CCRREEAACCKK  Once on a rainy day there was three explores well actually they were very brave kids there names were Marcus,Anne and Poppy.
They could hold their breath for one hour.One day they found a water bowl.
Under it was a cave a underwater cave so they decided to check it out so the went in to the
cave they started to walk deeper into the cave.


As Marcus,Anne and Poppy touched the glass wall
Marcus,Anne and Poppy could feel the water pushing against it,
the wall started to break.


Marcus,Anne and Poppy started to run they could start to taste the salty water and smell dead fish they finally found a way out they thought they were saved,but sadly a shark was near so


They started to lose hope
They thought it was the end of Marcus,Anne and Poppy.


But in the distance they saw light the they thought it be the end of Marcus,Anne and Poppy  but no so they ran and ran and ran,
But When they got there they realised that it was just a reflection of the real way
Out.


It was a dream,so they had a idea to to pinch as hard as the could
on Themself the check and then they would wake up then poppy said
’’why don’t we just hold our breath because our high score is one hour ‘’wed get yourself killed by the  shark dumb dumb’’


So they pinched there self  a hard as they could and as soon as you  know it they were in bed there mum came up and said ‘’there’s a shark in our kitchen there’s a shark in our kitchen ‘’ .
Marcus,Anne and Poppy  looked at each other and smiled,
‘’Now who wants to go to marine life ‘’said mom. Marcus,Anne and Poppy started to laugh,now this is the end of THE UNDERWATER CAVE.
THE END

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